The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates the average of

temperatures

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in three different

metropolis

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:

London

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,

Sydney

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and New York,

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the table gives the total annual

hours

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of

sunshine

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in the same

metropolis

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. The city that has the highest

temperature

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is

Sydney

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and

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it’s

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the city with the highest

sunshine

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hours

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between the three. The

temperatures

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in

Sydney

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since

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from

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January

until

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to

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March are stuck

on

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at

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25

degrees

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while

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on Aprile until June we have a drop of 10

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.

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, in July the

temperatures

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start to increase

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in December they become stable again

on

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25

degrees

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,

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the total annual

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number of

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sunshine

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hours

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is 2473. In

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London

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London,

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the situation

very

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different

,

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the weather is really cold in January,

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in fact

, the

temperature

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is around 10

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, but in February the weather changes and the

grades

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are increasing. We reach the highest

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in July, but after August, we can notice

an

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high drop

of the

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temperatures

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until November. The

temperature

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become

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stable again in November. The total annual

of

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number of

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sunshine

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hours

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in

London

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is 1180, much different

compered

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compared

to

Sydney

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. In New

York

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the

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don’t reach 25

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. We can see how the

temperatures

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increase

since

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from

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January

until

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June and become stable for the other three months. The highest

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in these months

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20

degrees

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. After

August

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August,

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the

temperatures

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decrease

like

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in

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London

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. The total annual

hours

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of

sunshine

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in New York

is

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2535

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2535,

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higher than

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London

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in London

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but lower compared to

Sydney

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