The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

The bar chart illustrates how many
hours
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of leisure
time
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were spent in a typical week, by sex and employment status, throughout the period from 1998 to 1999.
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, the figures for unemployed and retired people had the most free
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,
while
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those who worked
full
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full-time
time
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had the least. The data for two
categories
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,
such
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as employed part-
time
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and
housewives
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housewives,
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included only
women
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, and has
average
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figure. The figures for unemployment and retired people were the same in both
categories
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, but
indicators
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the indicators
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for men were slightly higher. Approximately 89
hours
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were
for
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spent by
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males in both
categories
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and
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, and
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78
hours
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for
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by
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women
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in these same
categories
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. The number of people who were employed full-
time
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was lower for males and females. 50
hours
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of leisure
time
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was
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were
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for men and 39
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for
women
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during the week. Looking at the
categories
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without men, only
women
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were shown for part-
time
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and housewives. The figure for housewives was slightly higher, approximately 55
hours
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of leisure
time
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. At the same
time
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, the number of
women
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who were
emloyed
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employed
part-
time
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was
lover
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lower
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- 45%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, time, categories, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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