The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares data about both the world

population

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and wealth proportions.

Overall

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population

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share was dominant in almost every country, except North

America

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, Europe, and Rich

Asia-Pacific

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Although

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North

America

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showed the highest abundance proportion, China was leading in

population

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size among other regions. Focusing on

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share, the countries

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Rich

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as Rich

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Asia-Pacific

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, North

America

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, and Europe saw low demographic levels, with the former experiencing a more pronounced rate, 5%, 6%, and 15% respectively.

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, the reverse was true for Latin

America

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& Caribbean, Africa, India, other

Asia-Pacific

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, and China, with the latter exhibiting a considerably high

population

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trend, about 7%, 10%, 16%, 16%, and 24% , respectively. Turning to global wealth distribution, North

America

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has nearly 35% of the world's wealth,

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Europe follows with 30% and

Rich

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the Rich

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Asia-Pacific

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with almost 25% became the third richest region.

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, the richness level in the remaining countries was lower than 5%,

whereas

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India and Africa are the poorest regions with only 1% of the affluence share.

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