The table shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table provides details
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the grades received from the
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patients
, across 3 health centres, based on different aspects of service. The first key feature shows that the Peveril
Centre
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has recorded the highest
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grade compared with the Longston
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, which is
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perceived
to have the lowest quality of services provided. Particularly, the highest score has been achieved by Peveril
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for the Response to concerns. At the same time and for the same criteria, the lowest one was
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recorded
by the Longston
Centre
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.
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, the Marchbank
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has achieved slightly higher evaluations than the
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second-mentioned
one for its performance with the patients, following a similar pattern across all the aspects mentioned in the table.
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, based on the grades for the Doctor’s service, all 3 institutions illustrate a similar level of customer satisfaction.
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, the Peveril
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was the leader in terms of provided evaluations, being followed by the Marchbank
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which
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, which
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recored
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recorded
a slightly higher score
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than
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the Longston
Centre
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, which performed poorly across all indicated criteria.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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