The graph below shows the average hose prices in three countries between the years 1997 and 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The following graph presents the average
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of a house in three different countries between the years 1997 and 2014.
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, the prices of accommodations in the three countries seemed to fluctuate throughout the periods given. First of all, the
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of a house in country A seemed to gradually increase
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1997 to 2000 and reached a rising peak in 2003 at slightly over 500 thousand. After 2003, the prices
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dropped until 2006.
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, after the
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drop, it can increase again in 2007
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it keeps gradually rising. In terms of country B, the
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of the houses
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gradually increased to
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2005,
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with the
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at 300 thousand, approximately.
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, the
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of the houses in country C was the lowest number from three countries, the figure slowly grew until 2007 and dropped in 2008, after that the prices
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up to 250 thousand and keeps rising.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words price with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
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