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The graph below shows our methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following bar graph represents types of
waste
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 elimination in four different countries
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 the Netherlands, Italy, Spain, and the UK.
Overall
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, every country has their own different ways to eradicate
their
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its
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waste
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. First of all, in the Netherlands, the most popular method to dispose of their
waste
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 is recycling, at almost 70%. The other ways to dispose of the
waste
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 are burning (10%), using
chemicals
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 (15%), and landfilling (8%). In Italy, 40% of the
waste
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 is landfilled,
while
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 22%, 20%, and 19% of the
waste
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was
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is
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 burnt, recycled, and used as
chemicals
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, respectively. In terms of Spain and the United Kingdom, the method popularly chosen to deal with their
waste
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 is landfilling, at 40% and almost 70%
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, respectively
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.
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, 30%, 18%, and about 11% of the rubbish in Spain is burnt, recycled, and turned into
chemicals
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, respectively,
while
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 18% of the garbage in the UK is used as
chemicals
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; 12% is recycled; and about 5% is burnt.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, chemicals with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste management
  • recycling
  • incineration
  • landfill
  • composting
  • methods of dealing with waste
  • percentage
  • comparison
  • significantly higher/lower
  • trend
  • observed
  • data
  • depicted
  • significant similarities and differences
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