The table above shows the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the information and making comparisons where relevant.

The table presents the

percentages

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of individuals who own mobile

phones

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in 2006, 2008 and 2010

used

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who used

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different features on their

phones

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.

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, in the given 3

years

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almost

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all mobile

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phones

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phone

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owners used their devices to make calls, and half of them used

their’s

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their devices

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to take pictures, send and

receiving

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receive

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text messages

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however

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however,

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other features

such

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as playing games, searching the internet, playing music and recording videos weren’t as popular. In the first two

years

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, every person with a mobile phone used

their’s

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their phone

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to make calls, but in the third

year

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the

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decreased by 1%. Meanwhile, the number of people who used the technology to take photos had a gradual and stable increase over the

years

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with

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60% in 2006, 71% in 2008 and 76% in 2010.

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, the

percentages

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of individuals who send and

received

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receive

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text messages with their mobiles grew from 73% in 2006 to 76% in 2008 to 79% in the

last

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year

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.

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Also

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the

amount

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number

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of people who played music on their

phones

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escalated over the three

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beginning

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with 12% in the first

year

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, and 18% the following

year

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to

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26% in the

last

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one.

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the other hand, the

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number

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of owners who played games with their devices saw a significant growth in

2008

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2008,

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with 42% owner from where it was in 2006 with just 17% owner,

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however

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however,

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in

2010

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2010,

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the

precent

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percentage

fell by 1%.

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there were no data

revolving

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on

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the

percentages

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of those who searched the internet or

record

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recorded

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videos on their mobiles in 2006,

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however

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however,

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in 2008 searching the internet via phone mobile were 41%

and

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those who

film

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filmed

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videos using the technology were 9%, but in 2010 both features witnessed a substantial growth to 73% and 35% receptively.