The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a European country that had acces between 1999 and 2004.

The bar graph gives information about the percentage of
urbab
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urban
, suburban and rural households in one European country from 1999 to 2004
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, it can be seen
there
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that there
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was an upward trend for urban and rural
areas
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throughout the period.
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in
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, in
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1999, about 15% of urban households had internet access compared with only around 1% in rural
areas
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. Access in urban
areas
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increased rapidly to reach 30% in 2000 and 40% in 2001. By
2004
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2004,
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more than half of urban households had access to
internet
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the internet
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comparison
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comparison,
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urban
areas
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rural
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and rural
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areas
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experienced
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growth
at a slower pace. From just 1% in 1999, internet accessibility reached about 5% in 2000 and 10% in 2001. It
then
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climbed to 15% in 2002 and 25% in 2003, reaching about 35% in 2004.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words areas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban
  • rural
  • access
  • percent
  • year
  • from
  • to
  • in
  • and
  • but
  • rise
  • grow
  • increase
  • start
  • end
  • higher
  • lower
  • difference
  • gap
  • trend
  • pattern
  • more
  • less
  • than
  • 1999
  • 2004
  • data
  • graph
  • show
  • these
  • also
  • could
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