The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph illustrates the numbers of males and Females attending different evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart provides information about the
ages
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of these course participants.
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, it can be clearly seen that the
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of females was higher than that of males in all majors except sculpture. As regards
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, the highest group of
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was 50 or over,
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the lowest group of
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was aged under 20. Looking at the details, we can notice that the
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of students in languages was
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20
men
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, and double that of
women
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. In terms of painting, the
number
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of students was similar
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approximately 25
men
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,
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and 30
women
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. As regards drama specialists, the
number
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of students was 10
men
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, and double that for
women
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. The
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specialist , who
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the lowest numbers for both genders , at 10
men
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, and just under 4
women
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, number, men, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "numbers of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 5 times.
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