The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie graphs compare the share of household energy usage categorised in six groups in Australia and the proportion of

emission

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emissions

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caused by each utilisation. In general,

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home appliances producing heat absorb the largest

electricity

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amount of electricity

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overall

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,

while

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those equipments result in a considerable amount of

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emissions

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.

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the first diagram, it can be observed that heating

make

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makes

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the majority of utilisation, amounting to 42%,

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followed by water heating, forming a

third,

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which

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that all those appliances absorb the largest energy. Making 15%, the other tools comprise a modest slice. The remaining three represent the lowest figures, which contribute merely 2% to 7%. In terms of emission, water heating (32%) and

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the unidentified

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group (28%) are responsible for the largest portion.

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, the

electronic

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electronics

with heating and

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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come in second place with 15% of

slice

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the slice

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. Lighting and cooling,

by contrast

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, are the least

share

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shared

among the figures.