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The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given chart describes the percentage of three types of
transport
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 preferred by young adults in the
UK
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, the USA,
France
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, and Italy in one year.
Overall
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, cars and motorcycles seemed to receive the most and the least popularity, respectively
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 most countries,
while
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 bicycles gained different interest across the four nations. To start with, cars are the most popular form of
transport
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 in Italy, the
UK
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, and the USA at 75%, 60%, and 60%, respectively.
However
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, in
France
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, cars are the second most popular type of
transport
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, at 40%. In terms of bicycles, they are preferred the most in
France
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 at 45%, followed by the
UK
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 at 30%.
In contrast
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, only 10% and slightly over 10% of
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this vehicle is
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these vehicles are
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 used in the United States and Italy, respectively. The next vehicle preferred by young adults in these four countries is
motorcycle
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the motorcycle
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.
According to
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 the graph,
this
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 type of
transport
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 is the least chosen form in
France
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 (a little over 10%).
Similarly
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, only about 10% of motorcycles are used in the
UK
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 and Italy.
Nevertheless
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, the motorcycle is the second most preferable
transport
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 in the USA, at 30%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, uk, france with synonyms.
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