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As part of a class assignment you have to Millions ofpeople every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer.

Millions of people move to
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-speaking countries in order to study in
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 because the idiom has become the universal
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.
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 is because
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 is the standard
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 in most areas
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 as business, science, technology, politics and so on.
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 is given to two main reasons:
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english colonization worlwide
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English colonisation worldwide
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 has
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established
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 in many countries, and
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 because of linguistic structure. Linguistic studies show that
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english
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 has a
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simpler
 grammar structure
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compared
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other
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Spanish,
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the most
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 spoken
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 in the world.
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 has just a neutral gender for the nouns and only four verb tenses, the
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 mentioned above have masculine, feminine, plural and singular articles and over thirteen verb tenses that don't follow
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 specific grammar pattern, which makes
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 more accessible to learn. In conclusion, whether it's because of historical or
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 reasons,
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 has become an important international
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 because it offers a more doable way
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 people from different places and
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 to communicate
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them to
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 deepen connections, exchange experience and enhance
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knowledge
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Answer both questions more fully. You say why people study in English and why English is important, but the ideas are short.
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Add one or two clear examples. This will make your main ideas stronger and easier to believe.
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Explain your points more. For example, say how English helps in jobs, study, travel, or world news.
coherence and cohesion
Use clearer linking words between ideas, such as First, Also, For example, and As a result.
coherence and cohesion
Make each body paragraph focus on one main point only. This will help the essay feel more ordered.
coherence and cohesion
Some sentences are hard to follow because of grammar and word form problems. Shorter sentences can help make your meaning clear.
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You answer the topic and give two main reasons why English is important.
coherence and cohesion
There is a clear ending paragraph that sums up your view.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay has a basic paragraph plan: start, middle, and end.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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