This chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Walse between 1918 and 2011

The chart above compares percentages of households that are in owned and rented

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England and Wales between 1988 and 2011. Rates are measured in percentages.

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, the views of households in rented spaces have the largest rates among.

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homes in owned accommodation have the lowest rates.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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