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The Diagram Below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram illustrates the process of recycling
the
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plastics and manufacturing them into
a
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new items. Generally speaking, the recycling divide into 9 stages, beginning with collecting
plastics
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plastic
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 waste until converting
them
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it
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 into
a
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brand-new products. At the initial stage, waste is collected in a trash bin, which dispose by people. After that, it is transferred to the recycling centre by a truck,
which
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then
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 the workers distinguish the waste in order to sort the required plastics.
Next,
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it is pressed in a compressing bin that
shape
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shapes
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 a block, after which it
crushed
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is crushed
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 through the use of
rotating
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a rotating
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mechine
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machine
 to produce
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tiny fragments and washed
them
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in a container before
further
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 processing. Once
this
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 process is completed, the fragment is put into
a
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special equipment to make the pellets. In the next phase, they are heated to produce raw material, after which
are
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they are
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 delivered to the factory to form
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blocks of semi-finished recycled output. Eventually, they are formed into varied products,
such
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 as clothes, pencils, and food containers, which are ready to
selled
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sell
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.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling process
  • collection stage
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • type and quality
  • recyclable plastics
  • contaminants
  • cleaned
  • shredded
  • plastic flakes
  • melted down
  • pellets
  • beads
  • raw material
  • manufacture
  • new products
  • distribution
  • completing the recycling loop
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