The graph below shows the percentage of 18-25 year olds in university in 4 different countries.

The graph gives information about the proportion of 18-

25 years old

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25-year-old

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students attending university

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in four different countries.

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, a clear increasing trend from all countries can be seen

with

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Thailand

recorded a

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highest figure

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while

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Malaysia had the lowest

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at

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the end of the period.

Initiallly

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Initially

, Singapore, Malaysia, and the

Phillippines

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Philippines

started with around 15

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, 2, and 7, respectively. Eventually, Singapore and the

Phillipines

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Philippines

showed a

continuos

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continuous

upward trend until

reached

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40 and 20 in 2011.

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, even with a noticeable increasing trend, Malaysia reached its highest point at 15

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in 19991,

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remained the same until the end of the period. In terms of the country with the most noticeable increase

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is Thailand, they started at just under 25

percents

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per cent

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in the beginning and eventually declined to about 20

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per cent in

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1991.

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, the figure

then

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rose sharply

reaching

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the highest number of approximately 43

percent

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per cent

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in 2011.