The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of people in Uk in 2004

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The bar chart compares how five different
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groups in the UK spent their money across three categories—food and drink, restaurants and hotels, and entertainment—in the year 2004.
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as people got older, they tended to spend more on food and drink.
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, spending on restaurants and hotels was generally higher among younger
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groups,
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entertainment spending saw a significant peak in the 61-75
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bracket. Regarding food and drink,
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category showed a consistent upward trend. The "Under 30" group spent the least, at just 6%.
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figure increased steadily with
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, nearly doubling to 13% for the 31-45 group and eventually reaching a peak of 23% for those aged 76 and over, making it their primary expense. In terms of the other two categories, spending on restaurants and hotels started as the highest expenditure for the "Under 30s" at 14%.
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increased, dropping to a low of only 2% for the 61-75 group before a small recovery to 7% for the oldest citizens. Entertainment spending followed a different pattern; it remained relatively low (between 7% and 14%) for most groups, but spiked dramatically to 23% for people aged 61 to 75, before falling back to 13% in the final
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category.

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