the graph below shows the hospital admissions for five hospitals in a European nation from 2004 to 2018

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admissions for namely fortmith, Adlin, Stanton Bradley and Oxley hospitals in a European country between 2014 and 2018.
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that Bradley hospital and Oxley hospital experienced
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skyrocket,
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while Adlin
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declineed
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, Fortmith hospital
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stable, with a slight fluctuation over the given period.

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