The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010

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demostrate

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demonstrates

the percentage of renewable

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energy in

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total

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the total

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energy supply in four different countries

during

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from

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1997 to 2010

overall

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iceland had the highest in the

barchart proprtion renweble

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bar chart proportion renewable

energy in all three years ,

australia

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Australia

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while

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Australia and Sweden had the lowest figures. Most countries showed an increase over time,except turkey because

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fluctuated slightly In

iceland

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Iceland

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, the

propotion

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proportion

rose significantly from about 45% in 1997 to 70% in 2010

in turkey

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. In Turkey, the proportion

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started at around 35

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increased to 40% in 2000,

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low

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fell

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to around 32%

Bunnijon16

Apr 19, 2026

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0
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

87 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

proportion
renewable energy
total energy supply
percentage
overall
changed
increases
decreases
fluctuating
trend
highest
lowest
significant
commitment
sustainability
environmental protection

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