The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrests.

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The pie chart shows the
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amount
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number
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of persons arrested during
five
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the five
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years ending
on
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in
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1994, and the bar graph illustrates the most common reasons for the lockdown.
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, it can be seen in the pie chart that men have the
most
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highest number
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amount
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of arrests
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, with
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a high of almost a quarter and a low of 68% who have not been under arrest. Moving on to
women
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women,
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it shows that a very low number have been arrested compared to the other group
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, with
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a high of 9%. And the bar chart shows that the most recent reason
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arrests
are
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due to
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public drinking for
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both groups
and
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, and
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with
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a
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low
amount
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which
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is theft. Starting
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can be seen
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that
most men got arrested
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for
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public drinking
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the
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a
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high of almost 30, and females with a high of almost 40,
then
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the others were almost the same
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such
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, such
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as beach of order,assaults,theft,other reasons
unless
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, unless
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like drunk driving and drinking in public places. Moving on
even
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drunk driving has the second highest
amount
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of
arrest
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arrests
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for both
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genders, with the highest
amount
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of men (25) and the lowest
amount
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of women (15)

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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