Many people prefer to watch foreign films than locally produced films. Why could this be?

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In recent years,

people

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more attention

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watching

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programs from foreign countries than programs from their own countries.

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trend and discuss about goverments should spend money to build up local film studios. First and foremost, the reason for

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trend is

globalization

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. Today

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people

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can easily access

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information in other

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countries

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with one click on

internet

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the internet

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people

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prefer foreign movies because

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good performance of foreign actors

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, in local

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people

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has

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curious about foreign

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reason

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why they

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this

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films

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. when it matchs with they type, so they

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than

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local

films

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Today In VietNam

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today in Vietnam

, young

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pay more attention

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movies from foreign

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as Us,China and Japan than

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Apr 24, 2026

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task response

Answer all parts of the task. You give reasons, but you do not clearly discuss if the government should spend money on local film work.

task response

Make your main idea clear in each part. One part should be about why people watch foreign films. Another part should be about your view on government money.

coherence and cohesion

Add a short ending. A clear last part helps the reader see your final answer.

coherence and cohesion

Use linking words in a simple way, like 'First', 'Also', 'For example', and 'In conclusion'.

coherence and cohesion

Support each main point with one clear reason and one clear example.

coherence and cohesion

You have a clear start that tells the reader the topic of the essay.

task response

You give one real example about young people in Viet Nam.

task response

Your writing stays on the topic of foreign and local films.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

136 words

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