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The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The provided pie charts illustrate that the percentage of five types of methods in a single country,
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categorised into
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 two designated
two
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apply
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years,
in
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apply
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1995 and 2005; Gas, Coal,
Petro
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, Nuclear and other.
Overall
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,
although
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 there is not singnificant change, a couple of resources showed some fluctuations.
Initially
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, both Gas and Coal account for about 30% over the periods
and
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, and
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Petro
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 provided the same level of these in 1995.
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, the rate of
Petro
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 decreased in 2005, changing from approximately 30% to around 20%.
Secondly
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, other and Nuclear ramped up for two decades, which meant
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that
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 the opportunity for using these is increased
instead
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 of
Petro
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, doubling not only from 4.9% to 9.1% at other but
also
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 6.4% to 10.10% at Nuclear

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Vocabulary: Replace the words petro with synonyms.
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