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The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

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This
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 diagram illustrates the United Kingdom and
the
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other
world
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countries' imports from
Scotlandin
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Scotland in
 2014.
Overall
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, the UK has the majority of electrical
importing
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imports
,
while
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 it has
the
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 minority in the other eight categories. Looking at the ROW bars,
it is clear that
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 hotels, restaurants and
buisness servecs
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business services
 have the highest share of
recieving
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receiving
 from Scotland at 13.8
billion
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.
Chimical
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 products and wholesale were spent 9.5
billion
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 and 8.2
billion
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, respectively. The imports of food and drink
manufactoring
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manufacturing
, and other unmentioned
manufactoring
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manufacturing
 were about 5.9
billion
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euro
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. There are more
importing
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 equipment and services,
as
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such as
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 agriculture,
mechnical
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mechanical
 equipment, electrical and other
serveces
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services
.
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, they did not spend more than 3
billion
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euro
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 for each. For the United States,
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 products spent the most, with 5
billion
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euro
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,
whereas
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 instrument engineering and
manufactoring
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manufacturing
 of food had approximately 4
billion
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for
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 each. The remaining types were imported
less
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 than 2
billion
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euro
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 for each.

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