It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are causes? And what will be the effects on society?

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Apr 29, 2026

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Answer both parts of the task. You wrote causes, but you did not explain the effects on society.

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Make your main ideas more clear. Write one clear reason in each body part.

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Add simple examples. This will make your ideas stronger and easier to understand.

coherence and cohesion

Use a clear order: introduction, cause 1, cause 2, effects, conclusion.

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Link ideas with simple words like because, so, also, and however.

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Some lines are hard to follow. Keep sentences short and direct.

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You started with an introduction to the topic.

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You tried to give reasons for why students do not choose science.

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Your writing stays on the main topic most of the time.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

94 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering and Mathematics)
intrinsic complexity
interdisciplinary
career counseling
hands-on experience
financial constraints
cultural stereotypes
technological stagnation
economic growth
foreign experts
healthcare advancements
educational gap
perceived difficulty
reliance
environmental challenges

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