You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or She always has parties and friends visiting. write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the roommate.

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Dear Mr John, I am Aiden, the student living in building B. I am writing to complain

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roommate, Kevin, who

have

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been messing up my living experience for a

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. To be more specific, he has hold serveral parties which many students attend during days and always plays a lot of annoying and loud Raps,

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, I could not concentrate on studying with continuous chatting and bouncing.

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scenario,

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have argued with him a couple of times, and ended up with no improvement and more arguments. I extremely desire a peaceful and pleasant break, especially after a long study day. I would like to inquire with you whether there is any chance I can change to another room which is away from it? I would appreciate it if you could find

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opportunity. If not, could you please give him some punishment so that he can

realize

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what he has done is wrong and

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his roommate. Looking forward to your reply at the earilier convenience. Yours faithfully, Aiden.

wythe26

May 4, 2026

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task response

Task response: Say the problem, what you did, and what you want in a more clear way.

task response

Task response: Use a more polite tone when you ask for help. Do not ask the warden to punish your roommate.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Link your ideas with simple words like because, so, and but.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Keep one main idea in each part and make your sentences shorter.

task response

Task response: You clearly say that your roommate has parties and this hurts your study.

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Task response: You give a clear request to move to another room.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear opening, middle, and ending.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your greeting and closing fit a formal letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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