The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented graph shows the changing rate of types of crime like burglary, car theft and robbery in New Port city
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during the time from 2003 to 2012.
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, robbery has always stayed at the lowest rate below 1000 incidents a year,
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burglary started at the highest and
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switched with car theft over time. Throughout all the
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robbery has stayed pretty stable balancing from 500 to 1000 acts in 2005. Burglary started at nearly 3500 times a year and
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jumped
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about 3800 in 2004. From
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it drastically dropped by 2600 in 4 years until 2008
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it reached 1200 incidents. It remained under 1500 for the next 4 years. The 3 year period from 2003
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2005 had
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approximately the same
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of car theft outbreaks
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of about 2800
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. In
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2006,
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it fell
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to 2000 accidents
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where it progressively grew again
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where it
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started at 2800 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • instances of crime
  • significant decline
  • noticeable change
  • fluctuating trend
  • relatively stable
  • minor fluctuations
  • dramatic reduction
  • converged towards
  • crime rate
  • time frame
  • notable trajectory
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