The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The provided diagram depicts the development of the
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of Stromer from 1995. Looking at the map of the
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of Stromer,
it is clear that
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the
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saw a complete renovation, with many new facilities replacing green spaces. In 1995, the
town
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was very simple. There were only two houses and a large area for farmland in the south. A forest was located in the north-east and west. There was
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only one shop in the middle of the
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. Looking at the map
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now, we can see many changes. The farmland in the south has been reduced to a smaller size, and an airport has been built in the north-east where the forest used to be. The houses from 1995 have been replaced by apartments.
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, a new school has been built in the
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of the
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, surrounded by many new shops.
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, the road system has changed. In 1995, there was only one main road, but now there are many more roads connecting different parts of the
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. Some forest areas still remain on the left side, but most of the
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is now covered with buildings.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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