The chart illustrates the percentage of male and female executives in seven different types of profession across the UK in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

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of executives in seven different professions of

male

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males

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and

female

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in the UK in 2007.

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, it is clearly seen that teaching had the best proportion of women,

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construction

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the highest among male. The least

professions

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represented professions

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of men and women included teaching and construction, which had the same percentage. In general, construction and teaching had the highest amount of choice among the male and female representatives, having 90

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May 7, 2026

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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