Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

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LOT

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PEOPLE

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AROUND THE WORLD DO NOT KNOW HOW MUCH IS WRONG TO

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FOOD

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FOOD.

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MUCH

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FOOD

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FOOD.

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THE QUANTITY IS NOT

LITTEL

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RESAURECH STUDIEST

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TOPIC, BUT WHAT IS THE SLOUTION HOW

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LOWER THE QUANTITY FOR

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OF IDEAS,

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AS IF WE CAN NOT FINSH WICH WE ORDER WE CAN DONATE THE LEFTOVERS TO SOMEONE NEED IT.. A

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PEOPLE

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TO DAY

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MONTHES

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MONTHS

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RESAERCHS

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RESEARCHERS

SAY 30% FROM THE

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WASTED

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,BUT WHAT IS THE SLOUTION HOW

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CAN WE

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PROBLEM? FIRST IDEI,

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YOU

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SOMEONE IN NEED. THESE DAYS, THERE

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A LOT

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WHICH CAN HELP YOU FOR THAT

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COME

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TAKE THE

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AND GAVE TO SOMEONE NEED IT BUT THEY HAS PROBLEM

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QOANTITY SHOUD

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SLOUSTION

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SOLUTION

YOU CAN CAPE TO

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FORE

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TIME

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TO SOMEONE IN YOUR FAMILY OR

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THE ANIMAL. THE MOST PROBLEM FOR

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IS, THEY ORDER

ORE

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THAN THEY NEED, THREEFOR THEY CAN NOT

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FINISH

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PROBLEM

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WE MUST REMAPER THEIR A

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PEOPLE

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task response

Answer both parts more clearly: why people waste food, and what can be done.

coherence and cohesion

Use clear main ideas in each body part. One part for causes, one part for ways to cut waste.

task response

Give simple but clear examples, like buying too much, big meals, and not using old food first.

coherence and cohesion

Link ideas with easy words like first, also, because, so, and in the end.

coherence and cohesion

Check each sentence. Many words are hard to understand, so your meaning is not always clear.

task response

You stay on the topic all through the essay.

task response

You give more than one way to cut food waste, such as giving food to people in need.

coherence and cohesion

There is a clear start and a clear ending.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Linking words
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4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

266 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

waste food
throw away
go bad
meal plan
shopping list
special offer
large pack
left-over food
date label
portion size
take food home
store food
freeze food
use up food
safe to eat
busy life
save money
eat out
order take-away
reduce waste

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