The diagram below show how leather goods are producted. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagram depicts how

leather

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goods are manufactured

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,

this

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linear process consisting three main steps, which are drying, washing, and polishing.

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step

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is drying the

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animal

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it is distributed to the factory so it can be washed with water and lime.

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process used water and lime in order to remove the

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from the dried animal

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.

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, the next

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will be soaking, the animal

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is soaked with lime again.

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, the animal

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is flattened with a machine, so that it is become a

leather

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and

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repeated the previous

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the previous step is repeated,

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which is soaking.

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step

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is polishing the

leather

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so that it will look presentable before it is distributed.

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, after finishing all of the steps and the

leather

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already packed, it is shipped to several factories.

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, factories will use the

leather

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to produce a

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variety

of products

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as shoes, bags, and toys.