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The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.

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The table provides information about
languages
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 with the highest
number
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 of native
speakers
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, measured by population.
Overall
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, the most significant feature is that
Mandarin
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 has the highest
number
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 of total
speakers
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 among all
languages
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. The highest
number
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 of native
speakers
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 is found in
Mandarin
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, at 1,090
million
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. English comes second in terms of additional
speakers
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, with 603
million
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,
while
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Mandarin
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 has 190
million
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 additional
speakers
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. The vast majority of
languages
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 by total
number
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 of
speakers
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 is
Mandarin
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 at 1,090
million
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.
In addition
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, there is a significant difference between English and Spanish in the
number
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 of additional
speakers
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, at 603
million
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 and 70
million
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respectively
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.
Moreover
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, the
numbers
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 of native
speakers
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 of Arabic and Portuguese are similar, at 206
million
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 and 203
million
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 respectively,
while
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 Hindi is considered the second most common language.
To sum up
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, the table shows some significant variations in the
number
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 of
speakers
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 among different
languages
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words languages, number, speakers, mandarin, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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