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Studying abroad is thought by many students to be the best way to get a good education. On the other hand, On the other hand, some students believe that studying in another country has many drawbacks. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Studying away from your hometown is a drastic change thats will make you totally a new person. Not all famalies prefer or able to send their sons and doughters to live
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 unique experience, for various reasons including cultire, social, and fainancial issues. In my point of view and as an individual who spent 3 years in the dorms away from my family and home, I encourage any student to take
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 step for a wide variety of reasons.
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eliminate the fear to be alone, which make you a stonger person.
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you will learn to be independent in the all aspect of life including fainancial, daily chore, and
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 managment.
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, encountering hard situations and deal with conflicts. Imagine you gained the previous benefits that I mentioned? how the shape of your future will be? Definitely you will be unstoupple person who take right decision in the right
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, some students do not use
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 oppurtiunity to grow and build them self.contversly, they spent their
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 randomly, just having fun around and lost their
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. Some peopole think studying abroad has a downsides, most of them claim that different culture and language that slower the student journey and make much harder.
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, in my opinion these opisticales will make a unique personalities.
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, even the drawpacks of studying abroad is considered a positive one.

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Write about both sides in a more equal way. You talk more about good points than bad points.
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Give a clear opinion in the introduction and keep it the same to the end.
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Add one or two clear examples for each main idea.
coherence and cohesion
Use clear paragraphing: one paragraph for the good side, one for the bad side, and one for your opinion.
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Link ideas in a simple way with words like First, Also, However, For example, and In the end.
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Make each sentence easy to follow. Some parts now are hard to understand.
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You answer the topic and give your opinion clearly.
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You include both good points and bad points.
coherence and cohesion
The essay has an introduction and a short ending.
coherence and cohesion
Some ideas follow a clear order, like First, Second, and Thirdly.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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