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Band 2.5

The plans below show what an airport looks like now and how it is expected to look after redevelopment in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The two maps illustrate the site of an
airport
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 at the present and how it
will
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is
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 expected to look after the improvement over the next
years
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few years
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.
Overall
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, the
airport
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 has undergone significant changes between the present and the planned future. Most
notably
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notably,
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 the transformation of the
numbers
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number
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 of
gates
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 will increase from 8 to 18, and the development of the passengers' facilities area.
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, several features were either
remover
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removed
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 or relocated to accommodate the
airport
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 expansion
,
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apply
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 and better services. In the current layout, the
gates
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 are located
in
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on
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 the southwestern side.
According to
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th
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the
 proposed plan, the
gates
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 will be
increase
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increased
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 to ten more
gates
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 and
Y-shaped
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a Y-shaped
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to increasing demand will be introduced
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design will be introduced to increase demand
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.
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Also
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 the walkway path will be
replace
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replaced
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 by a sky train.
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, new
facilites
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facilities
 are expected to
introduced
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be introduced
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 to the departure and arrival sides.
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, the area around the
gates
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, the side in the
center
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centre
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 of the
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airport
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airport,
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 is expected to witness
a
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apply
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fewer changes.
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furthermore
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Furthermore
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, ATM, bag drop, and car hire
,
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apply
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 are expected to be built around the area of
secuirt
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security
 and customs. These
cahnges
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changes
 suggest a shift towards more accessible facilities and
increaseing
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increasing
 the
damand
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demand
 by the passengers.

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Write a clearer overview. Say the main big changes in one short part.
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Cover more key parts of the maps. For example, say where shops, cafe, and new roads or lines are.
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Be careful with wrong facts. Check the number of gates and the place of new things.
coherence and cohesion
Group ideas by area. For example, write one part for gates, one part for services, and one part for transport.
coherence and cohesion
Use simple link words well, like first, next, also, while, and in contrast.
coherence and cohesion
Make each sentence easy to follow. Some lines are hard to understand now.
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You gave an overview and tried to compare now and the future.
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You mentioned some main changes, like more gates and a sky train.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay has clear paragraphs.
coherence and cohesion
You used some link words, like overall, additionally, and moreover.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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