Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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Write a full answer. Your essay stops in the middle, so the task is not complete.
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Answer both questions clearly: say if big money is needed, and say what makes a movie successful.
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Add one or two real examples to support your ideas.
coherence and cohesion
Use a clear plan: introduction, body 1, body 2, and conclusion.
coherence and cohesion
Make each main idea one full paragraph.
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Link ideas with simple words like first, also, however, and finally.
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You start with the topic and show your main idea early.
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You use 'On one hand' to show essay direction.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
Countries around the world increasingly facing housing crises ever than before. As the urban areas are already overpopulated, the development in the rural areas is the only option. In my opinion, the wise planning of a farmland, can accommodate each citizen's needs.
It is proposed that a higher priority needs to be given to the preservation of particular ancient monuments compared to others. I fully support this assertion based on factors as valid as the level of historical and monetary values that they possess.
In this contemporary modern era, individuals are going away from traditional newspapers to online platforms making newspapers a thing of the past. In my conviction, it is convenient for the readers and regularly updating ,hence, this writer wholeheartedly agrees with the caption statement.
Having a gap year before attempting to enter university is becoming more widespread among high school graduates. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of having a gap year and provide a logical conclusion.