The table below gives an information about UK independent films. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table gives an overview
regarding Independent
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films
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over the course of 2012 in
UK
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the UK
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and
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the Republic
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of Ireland;
in particular
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data compares the
amount
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number
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of
film
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films
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released with the share of income from ticket sales. What stands out the most from
this
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table is the dominance of documentary and drama
films
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released,
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Biopic
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genre
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are at the bottom of
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list.
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, it is evident a gap between the two most released genres, with regard to the rate of profit made by these
films
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, since
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rate almost doubles
documentary
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the documentary
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percentage. It can be clearly seen that Comedy
films
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have the highest share
for
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profit, verging on just over 45% of the total, doubling the second
genre most popular
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most popular genre
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, which is Horror. Turning to Biopic, it counts only one film made,
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it represents the third most
selled
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sold
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overall
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. A notable
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is that Romance
films
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represent only 3,4 percent of
films
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released during 2012, accounting for a mere 0.8% of income from the box office.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words films with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • independent films
  • box office earnings
  • genre
  • budget
  • dramatic increase
  • niche market
  • experimental cinema
  • diversification
  • profitability
  • audience interest
  • investment in film industry
  • low-budget films
  • high-budget films
  • release trends
  • performance metrics
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