The pie charts below show reasons why people left the UK for other countries and why people stayed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts compare percentages regarding reasons that prompt British
people
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to leave or to stay in the UK. What stands out the most from the data is that the dominant cause
of
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for
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British
to
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people to
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stay is
for
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apply
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family
of
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and
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friends,
while
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the main
motif
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motive
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that
drive
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drives
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British
people
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to leave is the hope for a better quality
life
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of life
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. A notable detail is that Financial factors represent more of an incentive to leave rather than to stay, with a significant gap of 9 percentage points; the same tendency is evident in choices related to
employement
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employment
, but with a minor gap of 3 percentage points. It can be seen that a cause that represent over than 10% rate for
people
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that
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who
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decide to go away from the UK is the weather,
while
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the same proportion
represent
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represents
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people
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that
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who
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choose to remain in the UK
due to
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a lack of language skills.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "represent" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
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