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The table shows the amount of leisure time people have per year in Someland, and the time they spend on some daily activities.

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The table compares the annual
hours
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 of leisure
time
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 spent on different
activities
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 by
people
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 of various
age
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groups
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 in Someland.
Overall
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, teenagers have the largest amount of free
time
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,
while
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 older
people
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 generally spend more
time
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 watching TV. Watching TV is the most popular activity across all
age
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groups
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,
whereas
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 cinema accounts for the smallest proportion
overall
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. In detail,
time
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 spent watching TV is consistently the highest, exceeding 400
hours
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 in every group and reaching over 1,000
hours
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 among teenagers and those aged over 70.
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, cinema figures remain below 100
hours
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 for most
age
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groups
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. Regarding social and sports
activities
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, younger
people
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 prefer group-based
activities
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. Those under 30 spend much more
time
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 socialising with 4 or more
people
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 and participating in group sports.
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, interest in these
activities
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 declines significantly with
age
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. Individual exercise is relatively stable across most
groups
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,
although
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people
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 in their 50s spend the least
time
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 on it.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, time, activities, people, age, groups with synonyms.
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