The table below shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries.

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The table below shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries.
The table compares the percentages of female
workers
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and female
managers
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in five different countries (Australia, Egypt, Sri Lanka, Japan, and the United States).
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it is clear that
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the proportion of women
workers
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in Japan was the highest.
Similarly
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, the
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of female
workers
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in the USA was higher than in Australia;
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the
percentage
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of women
managers
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was the same in both countries at 43% each. Looking at the details, the
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of female employees in Japan was higher than in the USA, at 48% and 46% respectively.
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, Australia and Sri Lanka had almost the same proportion of women in employment, at 42% and 41% respectively.
In contrast
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, Egypt had the lowest
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of female
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compared to other countries, at just 20% for the workforce and 12% for
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,
while
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Sri Lanka recorded the lowest
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of female
managers
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at only 9%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words workers, managers, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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