Write a letter to a friend inviting him/her to an exhibition. In your letter: explain what the exhibition is about say why you want your friend to come with you suggest a suitable time for visiting it

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Dear Bella, It was great to hear from you. How have you been? I’m writing TO you because I want to invite you to an

exhibition

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. Yesterday I thought about our

5 year(s)

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5-year

friendship

and

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, and

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I understood that we have never been TO an

exhibition

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together! We need to fix it! So, I have found

one

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interesting

exhibition

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at the Hermitage Museum. It is AN interesting historical

exhibition

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about THE 18th century. I know that you really like the history of Russia and will be happy to see it. By the way, which time is more

comfortable CONVENIENT

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convenient

for you?

Last

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weeks are (НЕ ПОНЯЛ) OVER THE

LAST

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TWO WEEKS I HAVE BEEN busy, but I will BE free next weekend. I suggest next Sunday, is it ok? If you go with me, it would/WILL mean a lot to me! (1 conditional) Best, Eva

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May 30, 2026

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task response

Task response: You answer all parts, but some parts need more clear detail.

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Task response: Use the right word forms and articles more often, so your ideas are more exact.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your letter is easy to follow, but some lines sound broken or not smooth.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Link your ideas with simple words like and, so, because, but.

task response

Task response: You explain what the exhibition is about and ask your friend to come.

task response

Task response: The tone is warm and friendly, which is good for a letter to a friend.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear opening, middle, and end.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Each paragraph has one main idea most of the time.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Linking words
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1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

144 words

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