The chart below shows the percentage of students choosing three university majors in a Saudi university from 2015 to 2025.

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illustrates the percentage of students choosing three university majors in a
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university from 2015 to 2025.
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medicine showed the highest by 40% in
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with 35%
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the Business was the
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with 25%. On the one hand, the percentage of medicine students decreased gradually throueted a years from 40% to 28 in 2025,
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the figure of Engineering fell
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from 35% to 26%
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in 2025.
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years with started with 25%, and as far as 2025 46%.

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