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Band 2.5

What do you think, what are the main effects of climate change? Which solutions can help to relieve its adverse impacts?

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Earth
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rainy
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 , but how much
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climate
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 impact on citizens , and how
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. On the one hand , what is the effect for
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 , a lot of resurch say clamate effect on population tradishonal ,
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 as Canada they do not have AC on them homes becuase them
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 is cold most of the year additional they used to teak amperela to any where to same reson , otherwhise in sude Aribia it is important to have AC becuase them
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 and they did not uesd to wake in streets and rods because the wather is
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 and hot most of the year .
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impossible
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climate
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desert
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 can solve the cold
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 by heating
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. In the end , all nations try to solve
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make
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 plans and gols but we should try to use the
climate
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 and find
benifets
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benefits
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Answer the full question more directly. Write clearly about the main effects of climate change, not only about different weather in different places.
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Add 2 or 3 clear main effects, such as heat, flood, dry land, or health problems. Explain each one with a simple reason.
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Give solutions that match the effects. For example, cut gas use, use clean power, plant trees, and make cities safer from heat and flood.
coherence and cohesion
Use one clear idea for each body part. Now the essay moves from one idea to another too fast.
coherence and cohesion
Link ideas with simple words like first, also, for example, because, so, and in the end.
coherence and cohesion
Make topic sentences clear. Start a body part with the main point, then add support and one example.
coherence and cohesion
You wrote an introduction, two body parts, and an ending. This shows a basic essay shape.
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You tried to use examples from Canada, Saudi Arabia, and Qatar. Examples can help your ideas.
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You answered both parts of the question: effects and solutions.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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