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More and more people are using online language translation applications. Are there more advantages or disadvantages of such services?

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Nowadays, more and more
people
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 are using online language
translation
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applications
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.
While
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 these
applications
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 offer several benefits, I believe their disadvantages outweigh their advantages. On the one hand,
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applications
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 make communication easier. Most
people
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 have smartphones and internet access, which allows them to translate words and sentences instantly.
This
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 is especially useful for travellers who need to communicate with
people
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 who speak different languages.
For example
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, tourists can use
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applications
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 to understand directions, ask for help, and interact with local
people
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 more easily.
On the other hand
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, these
applications
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 are not always reliable. They depend heavily on internet access, and
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 errors can occur when the connection is poor.
In addition
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, they often struggle to understand accents, speaking styles, and fast conversations.
For instance
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, in my job as a nurse, we once used a
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 application to communicate with a Turkish patient who could not speak Arabic or English. Because he spoke very quickly and used a different accent, several mistakes occurred during the
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 process.
Consequently
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, communication became difficult
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, and
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 the patient became frustrated and uncooperative. In conclusion,
although
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 online
translation
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applications
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 are useful for basic communication, I believe their drawbacks are greater than their benefits because they cannot always provide accurate translations and cannot replace learning a language.

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Say more about why the bad points are stronger than the good points.
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Add one more clear idea about a downside, like wrong meaning in important talks.
coherence and cohesion
Use a stronger link between the second body paragraph and your final opinion.
coherence and cohesion
Some ideas are clear, but you can explain them a little more to make the essay fuller.
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You answer the question and give a clear opinion from the start.
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You use a real example from your work, and it fits the topic well.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay has a clear start, middle, and end.
coherence and cohesion
Your ideas move in a natural order and are easy to follow.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • basic meaning
  • save time
  • reduce stress
  • daily life
  • different countries
  • ask for help
  • learning materials
  • cheap or free
  • easy to use
  • make mistakes
  • cause confusion
  • serious problems
  • depend on
  • learn a language
  • real skills
  • support tool
  • full replacement
  • professional translation
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