The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

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The charts illustrated the digital discounts of retail
business
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businesses
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in New Zealand between 2003 and 2013.
Overall
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, the habits of travelling was excel to in 2003 rather than other categories.
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, the proportion of film/music brought
on
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online was the superior number in 2013.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • E-commerce
  • Retail sectors
  • Growth rate
  • Decade
  • Decline
  • Trends
  • Online transactions
  • Consumer behavior
  • Market share
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Digital era
  • Accessibility
  • User-friendly platform
  • Market dynamics
  • Predictive outlook
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