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The graph below shows the internet users as percentage of population in usa Canada mexico

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The line graph illustrates the daily active users of the Internet in
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USA
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,
Mexico
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 and Canada. Units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
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USA
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the USA
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 and Canada have had a steady rise from 1999 to 2009,
while
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Mexico
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 was still growing slowly.
According to
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 the chart,
it is clear that
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 Canada was dominant among
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USA
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the USA
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 and
Mexico
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. Specifically, it was 20 per cent in 1999 and rose to 100 per cent in 2009.
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, even though
Mexico
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 had the smallest fraction, it remains stable. In terms of the line graph, it is seen that
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USA
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the USA
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 was rising dramatically, and compared with
Mexico
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, both countries started approximately at the same proportion, 10%, and in 2009
USA
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 was improving about 2 times faster.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, mexico with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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