The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydro
power
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station. On the diagram, we can see a pretty interesting process to generate energy from the
water
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.
Firstly
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, we can see that
water
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is flowing from the river to the so-called High-level
reservoir
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.
That is
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the special space to collect
water
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that is
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also
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blocked by the dam, which doesn’t let it flow away. Another interesting point is that people open it during the day, but at night they closes dam to save more
water
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, which is flowing from the high-level
reservoir
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to the
power
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station during the day, but at night people are usually pumping it up.
Secondly
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,
water
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flows to the generator in the
power
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station. A generator looks like a motor, which is spinning at a high speed, and with that , turning
this
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energy into electricity
that is
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going to a generator. After that , electricity goes through the
power
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lines and is distributed to the national grid. But what is actually happening to the
water
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? Well, how did I say, in a day it flows down, and goes to the low-level
reservoir
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, but at night people pump it back to the High-level
reservoir
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. That's the whole process.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words power, water, reservoir with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • potential energy
  • mechanical energy
  • electrical energy
  • turbine
  • generator
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • power lines
  • gate-controlled tunnels
  • gravity-driven
  • transformation
  • clean energy source
  • sustainable
  • recycled water
  • mountainous area
  • activate
  • transmit
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