The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart shows how families in one country spent their weekly income on eight different categories in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
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, there were significant changes in spending habits over the period.
Food
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was the biggest expense in 1968,
while
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leisure
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and housing took the largest shares in 2018. Spending on
food
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, clothing and footwear, fuel and power, and personal
goods
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decreased,
whereas
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expenditure on housing, transport and
leisure
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increased. In 1968, families spent the largest proportion of their income on
food
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, at 35%. Housing
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clothing
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footwear each accounted for 10%. Around 9% of weekly income was spent on
leisure
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and personal
goods
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,
while
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transport and household
goods
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made up about 8% and 7% respectively. Fuel and power
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the smallest category, at just over 6%. By 2018, spending on
food
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had fallen sharply to about 17%. The figures for clothing and footwear, fuel and power, and personal
goods
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also
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decreased to around 5%, 4% and 4%
respectively
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. Household
goods
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remained almost unchanged at approximately 7%.
On the other hand
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, housing increased considerably from 10% to about 19%. Transport spending rose from around 8% to 14%.
Leisure
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showed the biggest increase, growing from about 9% in 1968 to 22% in 2018, making it the largest spending category.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, leisure, goods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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