The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present

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The maps illustrate how the town of Ryemouth has changed between 1995 and the present day.

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, Ryemouth has undergone significant development, with more housing, improved leisure facilities, and a shift toward tourism. The removal of the fishing port and fish market has allowed the beachfront to be modernised and made more attractive to visitors. In the northern part of the town, the farmland that once occupied a large area has been replaced by a golf course,

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a tennis court has been added to the forest park. The shops located near the main road have been demolished and replaced with restaurants.

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, a new road has been constructed leading westward, improving access to the surrounding areas. To the south, the fishing port and fish market that previously supported the local economy have been removed. In their place, a line of modern apartments has been built along the beach, providing accommodation for tourists and contributing to the town’s development as a coastal destination.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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4 paragraphs

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Topic Vocabulary:

Urban development
Infrastructure
Residential area
Commercial district
Public amenities
Greenery
Renovation
Expansion
Demolition
Construction
Accessibility
Public transport
Urbanization
Evolution
Gentrification

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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present

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