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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table compares the annual
milk
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production
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 in four countries - the
Netherlands
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,
Australia
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,
Tanzania
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, and
Guatemala
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 - in 1990, 2000, and 2010, measured in
litres
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.
Overall
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, it is evident that
milk
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production
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 increased in three countries, including the
Netherlands
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,
Tanzania
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, and
Guatemala
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, with substantial growth in
Guatemala
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 and a slight rise in the
Netherlands
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 by 2010.
By contrast
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,
Australia
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 registered a reduction in
milk
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production
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 over the period. In 1990, the
Netherlands
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 was the leading country in
milk
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production
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 at 11,262,000
litres
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, followed by
Australia
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 at 11,246,000
litres
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.
In contrast
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,
Guatemala
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 and
Tanzania
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 accounted for the lowest amounts of
milk
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production
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 at 26,000 and 87,000
litres
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, respectively. By 2010, the
Netherlands
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'
production
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 decreased slightly to 11,155,000
litres
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 in 2000 before increasing moderately to 11,466,000 by 2010,
whereas
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Australia
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's declined steadily to 9,165,000
litres
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at the end
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 of the period.
However
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, both countries maintained their rankings in
milk
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production
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. Meanwhile,
milk
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production
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 in
Tanzania
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 grew considerably to 155,000
litres
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,
while
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milk
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production
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 in
Guatemala
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 rose sharply to 84,000
litres
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, production, netherlands, australia, tanzania, guatemala, litres with synonyms.
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