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The two maps below show an island, befor and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The two maps below show an island, befor and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The map highlights a territory, past and future addition of visitors
relaxation
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, and relaxation
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.
Overall
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,
what’s
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what
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 stands out from both maps is that
terrain
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the terrain
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 will
be developed
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undergo
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 significant changes after
construction
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the construction
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 of places where people can live.
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, it is forecast that some places where people can eat meals and marina will
opened
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be opened
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. In detail, approximately twenty accommodations will be built around the palm trees.
Thus
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, individuals may not only walk in
this
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 area
but
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, but
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also
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 they may use vehicles. A
further
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 development is in the
center
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centre
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 of the island,
such
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 as openned restaurant and reception. Regarding the coastal area, citizens did not use to swim
in
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at
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 the beach. Since
,
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apply
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 tourists will be able to swim
in
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on
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 the beach.
Furthermore
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,
bottom
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at the bottom
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 of the area, a pier will be erected
and
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, and
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 ships will be able to approach the shore.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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