The table below presents the food consumption per person weekly in a European country in 1992, 2002 and 2012

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The amount of food consumed per
person
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every week in a country in Europe is shown
through
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in
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the data table. It presents the information in 1992, 2002 and 2012. In general, vegetables and meat are two types of food that have high
consumption
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, about more than two
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and one hundred
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on average with vegetables and around one thousand and one hundred
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with meat. Vegetable intake, the highest of all, is recorded to increase steadily over time, from 2140 in 1992 to 2190 in 2002 and reached its
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peak
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in 2012 with 2220
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per
person
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.
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, the level of meat
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rose from 1148
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per
person
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to 1211 between 1992 and 2002,
it
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later dropped rapidly to 1132 in 2012. At the same time, wheat, beans and cheese are consumed less than others. Wheat and beans both grew gradually
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while
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cheese, the lowest among all the
food
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foods
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, fluctuated slightly between 1992 and 2012. In ten years, wheat
consumption
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increased considerably from 837 to 920
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for each
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person
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,
then
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peaked at 977 in 2012. The number of beans consumed didn't go up dramatically
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rose from 532 to 546 and ended at 590
grams
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for each individual in 2012. During the period from 1992 to 2002, each
person
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’s
consumption
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of cheese
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rose from 113 to 125
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,
then
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remained stable till 2012.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words person, consumption, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "presents" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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