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The bar chart shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of households in the US by annual
income
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 during 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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was
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fluctuated over three years. All
income
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 approximately
similar
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the same
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 number of households. In detail, in 2015 the most high in $100,000 or more acouunted about 34
(millions)
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, in 2007 the second higher repesent aroun 29
million
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, and the lowest was in 2011, around 26
million
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. In the $50,000- $74,999 range, a similar number of households , around
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22 million
.  The annual
income
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 of $75,000-$99,999 in three years represented nearly 15
million
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. $25,000-$49,999 in 2011, about 30
million
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.
whereas
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 in less than $25,000
income
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 in 2011 accounted for 28
million
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • households = homes / families living together
  • annual income = money made in one year
  • the number of = how many
  • rose = went up
  • fell = went down
  • remained stable = stayed almost the same
  • slightly = a little
  • sharply = by a lot
  • the largest group = the biggest group
  • the smallest group = the least big group
  • accounted for = made up
  • in contrast = but
  • while = at the same time / but
  • overall = in general
  • respectively = in that order
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